Your landing page’s weakest score is Trust.
How Peregrine ranks
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Trust
58FairProof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.


| Trust read | |
|---|---|
| Peregrine | "18% reduction in violent crime for the Kansas City Police Department" stat on the mobile capture |
| Body-cam product demo with AI annotation "DRIVER-SIDE DOOR CLOSED; ENGINE IGNITION DETECTED" on an Axon Body 4 frame | |
| Photo of a police officer in a POLICE vest operating Axon drone hardware (mobile hero) | |
| No visible trust signal identified. | |
| "FBI-CJIS & SOC 2 TYPE 2 COMPLIANT" compliance eyebrow above the headline | |
| Photos of uniformed officers using laptop-mounted software in a patrol car and evidence room |
Value props
64FairTitle, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?
Context changes everything
Peregrine surfaces the unseen connections in your data. The result: new perspectives, shared awareness, faster action, and new ways of working.
Working
- Hero image demonstrates real incident-response use
- Subhead names outcomes: awareness, faster action
- Mobile proof: 18% crime reduction, named customer
Could improve
- Headline could caption any product
- No audience named — public safety buyers unclear
- Desktop fold has zero numbers or proof
CTA
68FairCopy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

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Information hierarchy
76FairDoes the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

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Mobile web
76FairThe phone experience as a first-class citizen.

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