Your landing page’s weakest score is Trust.

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68Growth scoreupdated

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Trust

58Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

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Trust read
Peregrine"18% reduction in violent crime for the Kansas City Police Department" stat on the mobile capture
Code FourBody-cam product demo with AI annotation "DRIVER-SIDE DOOR CLOSED; ENGINE IGNITION DETECTED" on an Axon Body 4 frame
Axon (Draft One)Photo of a police officer in a POLICE vest operating Axon drone hardware (mobile hero)
AbelNo visible trust signal identified.
Truleo"FBI-CJIS & SOC 2 TYPE 2 COMPLIANT" compliance eyebrow above the headline
Mark43Photos of uniformed officers using laptop-mounted software in a patrol car and evidence room

Value props

64Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Peregrine’s headline vagueContext changes everythingPeregrine surfaces the unseen connections in your data. The result: new perspectives, shared awareness, faster action, and new ways of working.

Working

  • Hero image demonstrates real incident-response use
  • Subhead names outcomes: awareness, faster action
  • Mobile proof: 18% crime reduction, named customer

Could improve

  • Headline could caption any product
  • No audience named — public safety buyers unclear
  • Desktop fold has zero numbers or proof

CTA

68Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

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Information hierarchy

76Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Peregrine desktop capture for Information hierarchy

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Mobile web

76Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Peregrine mobile capture for Mobile web

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