TakeCareOSYC P26 landing page report.
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Your landing page’s weakest score is Trust.

Fix Trust

Score over time

908070605040ShiftCare 79 on Jul 30 (Live)Lumary 66 on Sep 20 (Live)Brevity 53 on Mar 14 (Wayback)Brevity 54 on Apr 21 (Wayback)Brevity 54 on May 6 (Wayback)Brevity 54 on May 13 (Wayback)Brevity 53 on Jul 30 (Live)iinsight 66 on Apr 14 (Wayback)iinsight 66 on Sep 20 (Live)SupportAbility 63 on Jul 30 (Live)TakeCareOS 65 on Sep 20 (Live)Sep 20

Trust

52Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

TakeCareOS
ShiftCare
Lumary
iinsight
Trust read
TakeCareOSProduct UI demo showing "Ask Atlas" answering "Can I get an update on Mark Thompson?" with shift and goal details
ShiftCareTrusted by 7,000+ providers powering over 300,000 support workers worldwide.
Lumary"$4 billion+ in annual claim amounts processed" stat row with 200+, 500K+, 80K+ usage numbers
BrevityTop-bar contact details: "Sales: 1300 58 58 87" and "Level 45, World Square, Sydney NSW 2000"
iinsightCustomer logo strip: Resilia, Gateway Pediatric Therapy, Centre for Corporate Health, ORS, Evergreen, Rebound Rehab
SupportAbilityNo visible trust signal identified.

CTA

62Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

TakeCareOS
ShiftCare
iinsight
Brevity

Problems

  • click feels like a sales call
  • no product value in the label
  • demo shown but not tryable

Value props

64Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

TakeCareOS’s headline undersellsThe Care Management Platform you can put to work.For disability, aged care & home care agencies You support those in need. TakeCareOS supports you.

Working

  • Names the exact ICP: disability & home care agencies
  • "TakeCareOS support those in need" line hits the right emotion
  • Hero screenshot demonstrates real AI participant query

Could improve

  • "put to work" is vague without seeing the demo
  • Zero numbers or proof points in the copy
  • Investor badge differs desktop vs mobile (DoorDash/Dropbox)

Mobile web

64Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture1234
  1. Primary CTA below fold — The 'Talk to us' button sits far down the page after a six-line headline and two-sentence subcopy, likely pushed near or past the first viewport on many phones.
  2. Headline wraps six lines — "The Care Management Platform TakeCareOS can talk to." scales down poorly, wrapping into six tall serif lines that consume most of the fold's message space.
  3. Talk to us button — Button is desktop-proportioned and floats left at roughly 40% width instead of a thumb-friendly near-full-bleed tap target.
  4. Header missing CTA — Mobile header keeps only 'Sign In' and drops the 'Talk to us' CTA, so no conversion action is instantly reachable at the top.

Information hierarchy

82Strong

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture123
  1. Duplicate Talk to us — Nav 'Talk to us' pill matches the hero CTA weight, splitting one action across two equal buttons.
  2. Investor badge line — 'Backed by the investors of DOORDASH' sits above the headline, making borrowed credibility the first thing read instead of the value prop.
  3. Cropped product screenshot — The app UI is cut mid-sidebar at the fold, so its 'Ask Atlas' payoff (the chat answer) never lands above the fold.