Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.
How Curtis Instruments ranks
Value props
28PoorTitle, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?
Curtis Instruments Joins Parker Hannifin
READ THE FULL PRESS RELEASE HERE
Working
- Parker brand adds credibility
- Real product photos below hero
- Clean, uncluttered fold
Could improve
- Headline is news, not a value prop
- Subhead points to a press release
- No claim about what Curtis makes
CTA
44PoorCopy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Problems
- links to press release, not product
- plain text link, no button styling
- six words, over length
- no product CTA anywhere in fold
Information hierarchy
52FairDoes the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

What works
What to improve
Mobile web
54FairThe phone experience as a first-class citizen.

What works
What to improve
Trust
64FairProof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

How Curtis Instruments compares
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