Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.
How Telegram ranks
Value props
52FairTitle, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?
Telegram
a new era of messaging
Working
- Screenshots show the real product UI
- Instant platform download paths
- Brand name is unmissable
Could improve
- Subhead could caption any messenger
- No numbers: file size, group limits
- Privacy and speed never stated
CTA
55FairCopy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?





Problems
- no action verb — reads as label
- styled as text link, not button
- 4-word label
- 'Recent News' competes for attention
Information hierarchy
58FairDoes the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

What works
What to improve
Mobile web
58FairThe phone experience as a first-class citizen.

What works
What to improve
Trust
66FairProof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

How Telegram compares
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