Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.

Fix Value props
62Growth scoreupdated

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Value props

48Poor

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Moderna’s headline vagueIR Insights: Recapping Positive Phase 3 Topline Results for Intismeran Autogene Plus Pembrolizumab in Adjuvant Melanoma

Working

  • Real clinical proof (Phase 3 results)
  • Concrete drug names, not abstractions
  • Credible, newsy tone signals momentum

Could improve

  • IR jargon unreadable to lay visitors
  • No subhead translating the science
  • Hero rotates; no stable value prop

Information hierarchy

58Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture123
  1. Double-tier navigation — Fifteen-plus links across two nav rows leak attention before the fold's single CTA appears.
  2. Carousel pagination dots — Nine auto-rotating slides mean no single value proposition owns the fold.
  3. READ OUR BLOG button — Ghost outline style is the weakest element in the fold; it loses the one-second scan.

CTA

62Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Moderna

How Moderna compares

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Trust

68Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Moderna desktop capture for Trust

How Moderna compares

Trust read

Mobile web

72Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Moderna mobile capture for Mobile web

What works

What to improve