Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories)https://withluna.ai/

Your landing page’s weakest score is CTA.

How Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories) ranks

  1. 1.Bedtimestory.ai78
  2. 2.StoryBee76
  3. 3.Pixley AI64
  4. 4.Oscar Stories63
  5. 5.Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories)59
Fix CTA
59Growth scoreupdated

category scores

CTA32Information hierarchy58
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CTA32Information hierarchy58

CTA

32Poor

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Bedtimestory.aiin-product action
StoryBee
Pixley AI
Oscar Stories

Problems

  • no CTA anywhere in either fold
  • hero ends in badges, not action
  • nav has no signup/start link
  • 'Set up in minutes' has no button

Information hierarchy

58Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture1
  1. Seven G2 badges — Seven same-weight shields blur into noise and compete with the headline; three would carry the same proof.

Mobile web

58Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories) mobile capture for Mobile web

What works

What to improve

Trust

68Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories) desktop capture for Trust

How Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories) compares

Trust read

Value props

78Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories)’s headlineAI Project Manager for Product TeamsLuna AI connects your strategy to Jira execution. It tracks OKRs and roadmaps, spots risks early, and drafts updates for managers and peers.

Working

Could improve