Your landing page’s weakest score is Information hierarchy.

Fix Information hierarchy
76Growth scoreupdated

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Information hierarchy

72Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture1234
  1. Duplicate primary CTAs — "Start creating" in the nav and "Start Creating Stories" in the hero split the primary action into two same-styled buttons.
  2. Story prompt input — A second conversion surface ("Write me a story about...") competes with the hero CTA for the same action, leaving two paths of equal pull in one fold.
  3. Sign In pill — A third account-entry point inside the prompt card duplicates the nav's Log in and pulls attention away from starting a story.
  4. Nav dropdown menus — Three dropdowns (Create, Listen, Explore) plus Pricing offer four exit paths before the visitor reaches the hero promise.

Trust

72Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Trust read
StoryBee"No ads, ever 20,000+ stories 10,000+ parents" stat strip under the hero CTA
Pixley AINo visible trust signal identified.
Oscar Stories"100k+" badge with five stars and "Recommended by educators" beside the app store buttons
Bedtimestory.ai"Loved & trusted by 80k+ happy members" with a row of member avatar photos
Luna (StoryTime AI / Luna Stories)Strip of seven G2 Spring 2025 badges under the hero, including "High Performer", "Users Love Us", "Easiest To Use", and

CTA

78Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

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Mobile web

78Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

StoryBee mobile capture for Mobile web

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Value props

82Strong

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

StoryBee’s headlineCreate Magical Bedtime StoriesAI-powered storytelling that adapts to ages 3-12. Personalized, illustrated, and audio-narrated stories made just for children.

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