Fusion Narrate (Dolbey)https://dolbey.com/

Your landing page’s weakest score is Mobile web.

How Fusion Narrate (Dolbey) ranks

  1. 1.CareSwift71
  2. 2.Fusion Narrate (Dolbey)54
  3. 3.ESO54
Fix Mobile web
54Growth scoreupdated

category scores

Mobile web44CTA48
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Mobile web44CTA48

Mobile web

44Poor

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture123
  1. Clipped CTA button — "Learn more about Fusion CAC" runs past the right edge, so the only action looks broken and half-tappable.
  2. Overflowing headline — "Col•lab•o•ra•tion" is cut off mid-word at the viewport edge — the desktop headline never scaled down for the phone.
  3. Truncated body copy — The definition line ends in "cod..." off-screen, hiding the actual value statement about Fusion CAC.

CTA

48Poor

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Fusion Narrate (Dolbey)
CareSwift
ESO

Problems

  • no action verb — noun label
  • no CTA in the desktop hero
  • 'Contact' feels costly/sales-y
  • desktop and mobile CTAs differ

Value props

52Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Fusion Narrate (Dolbey)’s headlineDecade of ExcellenceFusion CAC has been named #1 Best in KLAS for Computer-Assisted Coding since 2017.

Working

Could improve

Information hierarchy

58Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Fusion Narrate (Dolbey) desktop capture for Information hierarchy

What works

What to improve

Trust

66Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Fusion Narrate (Dolbey) desktop capture for Trust

How Fusion Narrate (Dolbey) compares

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