Mobile web

58Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture1234
  1. Uncollapsed nav row — ROADMAP, JOIN US, icon button, and CTA crammed into one row instead of a hamburger, squeezing the quote button.
  2. Hero without message — The first viewport is only a photo — headline, subhead, and any in-flow CTA are all pushed below the fold.
  3. Four-line headline wrap — Desktop-sized headline scales down too little and wraps into four cramped lines below the fold.
  4. Sparkle icon button — Unlabeled icon-only Constellation button gives no clue what it does and crowds the primary CTA.

Trust

62Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Trust read
Cosmic RoboticsReal field photo of the COSMIC "1A-0003 KIPP" robot placing solar panels beside Cosmic-vested workers
Charge RoboticsNo visible trust signal identified.
Sarcos (Terabase-adjacent alternative) — Terabase EnergyAerial photo of a real utility-scale solar tracker installation in the hero
Rosendin (Built Robotics) — Built RoboticsReal machine on a job site labeled "RPD 35 ROBOTIC PILE DRIVER" bearing the Built Robotics "B" mark
AES Maximo (AES Corporation)implicit context AES Maximo (AES Corporation) may benefit from pre-existing familiarity among its target audience.
Sarcos (formerly Sarcos Robotics)"INVESTORS" navigation link implying a publicly traded company

CTA

68Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Cosmic Robotics

How Cosmic Robotics compares

Recommended rewrites

Value props

76Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Cosmic Robotics’s headlineAUTONOMOUS CONSTRUCTION ON EARTH AND BEYONDRobotic equipment for the world's critical infrastructure. The first frontier: solar and data centers.

Working

Could improve

Information hierarchy

78Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Cosmic Robotics desktop capture for Information hierarchy

What works

What to improve