Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.

Fix Value props
52Growth scoreupdated

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Value props

48Poor

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Lonza Bioscience’s headline undersellsWelcome to Lonza BioscienceWe provide life science researchers with the tools they need to develop and test therapeutics, from basic research to final product release.

Working

  • Subhead names the exact audience
  • States full research-to-release span
  • Second line lists concrete offerings

Could improve

  • Headline says nothing about value
  • No numbers or proof points in fold
  • Hero image decorates, not demonstrates

Mobile web

48Poor

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture12
  1. Oversized hero headline — "Welcome to Lonza Bioscience" wraps into three giant lines eating a third of the viewport with no CTA in sight.
  2. Double-decker corporate header — Gray Lonza bar with three division links stacks above the Bioscience header, pushing content down before the hero starts.

CTA

52Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

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Information hierarchy

54Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Lonza Bioscience desktop capture for Information hierarchy

What works

What to improve

Trust

58Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Lonza Bioscience desktop capture for Trust

How Lonza Bioscience compares

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