BloomYC P26 landing page report.
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Your landing page’s weakest score is Trust.

Fix Trust

Score over time

85807570656055Frontify 68 on Aug 22 (Live)Brandfolder 61 on Mar 23 (Wayback)Brandfolder 62 on Apr 8 (Wayback)Brandfolder 65 on May 1 (Wayback)Brandfolder 64 on Sep 20 (Live)Acrolinx 69 on Sep 20 (Live)Writer 75 on May 27 (Wayback)Writer 72 on Jun 16 (Wayback)Writer 67 on Jul 14 (Wayback)Writer 73 on Jul 27 (Wayback)Writer 74 on Aug 11 (Wayback)Writer 69 on Aug 25 (Wayback)Writer 60 on Sep 20 (Live)Jasper 72 on Jun 27 (Wayback)Jasper 71 on Jul 12 (Wayback)Jasper 70 on Jul 25 (Wayback)Jasper 72 on Aug 9 (Wayback)Jasper 69 on Aug 21 (Wayback)Jasper 73 on Sep 11 (Wayback)Jasper 65 on Sep 20 (Live)Bloom 78 on Apr 3 (Wayback)Bloom 77 on May 2 (Wayback)Bloom 66 on Sep 20 (Live)Apr 3May 2Sep 20
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  1. Sep 20, 202666LiveOverall −11 · Value props −26 · Trust −20Viewing
  2. May 2, 202677Overall −1 · CTA −6 · Value props +2View →
  3. Apr 3, 202678First tracked report — strongest CTA 84, weakest Trust 62View →

Trust

44Poor

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Bloom
Acrolinx
Writer
Trust read
Bloom"CONNECT BLOOM WITH" integration row listing Claude, Cursor, and OpenClaw
FrontifyAsset-tagging UI overlay on the hero image showing "PNG" and "Magic hour" metadata chips
Brandfolderimplicit context Brandfolder may benefit from pre-existing familiarity among its target audience.
Acrolinx4.7 Reviews on Capterra / 4.8 Reviews on G2 Crowd rating badges above the headline
Writer"World-class enterprises trust WRITER" logo strip with Dropbox and e.l.f. logos (mobile capture)
Jasperimplicit context Jasper may benefit from pre-existing familiarity among its target audience.

Value props

58Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Bloom’s headline vagueThe brand layer for marketingBloom turns your brand into a working system that powers everything you create.

Working

  • Positions a clear category slot
  • Integration logos hint at agent use case
  • Connect MCP CTA signals technical value

Could improve

  • 'Working system' is abstract, unparseable
  • No numbers, outcomes, or proof points
  • Hero art decorates, doesn't demonstrate

CTA

72Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Bloom

Problems

  • generic label, no product payoff
  • no headline echo
  • banner CTA competes for attention

Information hierarchy

78Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture1234
  1. Banner View plans pill — First button in the scan path pulls visitors to pricing before the headline or primary CTA registers.
  2. Six-item nav row — Teams, MCP, Docs, Templates, Pricing, and Company all sit at equal weight, offering many exits before Get Started.
  3. Integrations More link — The Claude/Cursor/OpenClaw row plus More → adds four exit paths directly under the CTA pair.
  4. Connect MCP button — Styled at nearly the same size as Get Started, splitting the click between two adjacent actions.

Mobile web

78Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture1234
  1. Sticky promo bar — The 20% off BLOOM20 bar with its View plans button eats fold space and routes taps away from Get Started.
  2. Get Started button — Primary CTA is only half the column width — desktop-proportioned instead of a thumb-friendly full-bleed button.
  3. Chat bubble — Floating chat launcher overlaps content at the bottom-right and adds a competing tap target.
  4. Connect MCP button — Second stacked button at near-equal weight dilutes focus on the single primary action.