throxyYC P25 landing page report.
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Your landing page’s weakest score is CTA.

Fix CTA

Score over time

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  1. Sep 20, 202674LiveOverall +4 · Mobile web +16 · Value props +4Viewing
  2. Jun 20, 202670Overall +24 · Value props +50 · Information hierarchy +28View →
  3. Jun 12, 202646Overall −1 · Trust −10 · CTA +4View →
  4. May 13, 202647Overall −21 · Value props −50 · Information hierarchy −28View →
  5. Mar 25, 202668First tracked report — strongest Value props 78, weakest Mobile web 58View →

CTA

66Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

throxy
Callbox
CIENCE
Belkins
SalesRoads
Martal Group

Problems

  • 'Apply' makes click feel costly
  • 5 words, too long
  • nav label differs from hero label

Trust

66Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

throxy
CIENCE
Belkins
Martal Group
Callbox
Trust read
throxy"Trusted by global sales teams" logo strip with Santillana, Sybilion, Lenovo, Jobandtalent, and Fleevo
BelkinsLogo bar labeled "Sales and marketing leaders at top B2B companies trust Belkins" with General Electric, CitrusAd, Cemtr
CIENCE"USED BY okta Microsoft Uber AND 2,500+ B2B TEAMS" logo strip under the hero CTA
SalesRoads"Trusted to drive sales for America's biggest brands" logo strip (Quest Diagnostics, Microsoft, Shell, Parker, Kuebix)
Martal Group"TRUSTED BY" logo wall with Halo, Zoho, Bosch, Micro Focus, SoFi, Eurofins (mobile capture)
Callbox"Trusted by Global Enterprise Leaders" logo strip with LinkedIn, Intel, HP, and DHL

Information hierarchy

78Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture1234
  1. Nav Strategy Call pill — Black high-contrast pill outweighs the lavender hero CTA, duplicating the same action at greater visual weight.
  2. Apply Strategy Call button — Pale lavender fill on cream background gives the true primary CTA less contrast than the nav duplicate.
  3. Calendar right edge — Friday column and 'SALES OPPOR...' labels are cropped mid-word, making the proof visual look broken.
  4. Backed by Y-Combinator — Badge text runs to the container edge and appears clipped at 'Y-Combinator'.

Mobile web

78Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture123
  1. Headline pushes CTA down — The four-line 'Qualified meetings with hard-to-reach buyers.' headline barely scaled from desktop, eating most of the first viewport and shoving the CTA to its edge.
  2. Truncated Y-Combinator badge — The 'Backed by Y-Combinator' label clips at the right edge, signaling an unchecked mobile layout right above the hero headline.
  3. Cut-off calendar section — The calendar graphic loses its left column and clips mid-cell at the fold, so the booked-call proof reads as broken on the phone.

Value props

82Strong

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

throxy’s headline sellsQualified meetings with hard-to-reach buyers. Done for you.Most outbound tools are built for tech companies with LinkedIn-active buyers. Traditional industries don't work like that. throxy is built specifically for companies selling into manufacturing, logistics, construction and beyond - reaching

Working

  • Names outcome: meetings, not software
  • 'Done for throxy' sets the service model
  • Subhead names real verticals

Could improve

  • No numbers anywhere in the fold
  • Subhead runs long at ~55 words
  • No meeting volume or timeframe proof