TornyolYC F25 landing page report.
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Tornyolhttps://tornyol.com/

Your landing page’s weakest score is Trust.

How Tornyol ranks

  1. 1.Tornyol71
  2. 2.Bzigo58
  3. 3.Photonmatrix18
Fix Trust
71Growth scoreupdated

category scores

Trust62Mobile web64CTA68Value props78Information hierarchy82
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Trust62Mobile web64CTA68Value props78Information hierarchy82

Score over time

100806040200Bzigo 67 on Apr 11 (Wayback)Bzigo 65 on Apr 23 (Wayback)Bzigo 65 on May 19 (Wayback)Bzigo 66 on Sep 8 (Wayback)Bzigo 58 on Sep 22 (Live)Photonmatrix 21 on May 15 (Wayback)Photonmatrix 20 on Jun 16 (Wayback)Photonmatrix 18 on Sep 22 (Live)Tornyol 69 on Jun 2 (Wayback)Tornyol 66 on Jul 3 (Wayback)Tornyol 72 on Jul 17 (Wayback)Tornyol 72 on Aug 11 (Wayback)Tornyol 74 on Aug 30 (Wayback)Tornyol 71 on Sep 13 (Wayback)Tornyol 71 on Sep 22 (Live)Jun 2Jul 3Jul 17Aug 11Aug 30Sep 13Sep 22
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  1. Sep 22, 202671LiveMobile web −20 · Trust +10Viewing
  2. Sep 13, 202671Overall −3 · Information hierarchy −6 · Trust −3View →
  3. Aug 30, 202674Overall +2 · Information hierarchy +6 · CTA −4View →
  4. Aug 11, 202672CTA +4 · Information hierarchy −2View →
  5. Jul 17, 202672Overall +6 · Mobile web +26 · CTA +6View →
  6. Jul 3, 202666Overall −3 · Mobile web −22 · Information hierarchy +6View →
  7. Jun 2, 202669First tracked report — strongest Mobile web 80, weakest Trust 52View →

Trust

62Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Trust read
TornyolBACKED BY Y COMBINATOR badge above the hero headline
BzigoNo visible trust signal identified.
PhotonmatrixNo visible trust signal identified.

Mobile web

64Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture12
  1. Reserve Tornyol's Spot CTA — Sits at the very bottom edge of the fold, a full screen below the header.
  2. Header Pre-order button — Duplicates the red CTA with a weaker label and competes with the hamburger.

CTA

68Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Tornyol
Bzigo

Problems

  • price in label = costly click
  • 6 words + price, two fixations
  • 'Pre-order' vs 'Reserve' mismatch

Value props

78Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Tornyol’s headline sellsNO MORE MOSQUITOESAutonomous drone protection for your home. Silent, safe, chemical-free.

Working

  • Outcome-first headline, zero jargon
  • Subhead kills noise/safety/chemical objections
  • Hero shows real drone, not a render

Could improve

  • No numbers: kill rate, coverage, speed
  • Hero test-rig setting reads lab, not home
  • No proof the drone actually catches bugs

Information hierarchy

82Strong

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture123
  1. Nav Pre-order button — Boxed button competes at near-equal weight with the hero's Reserve Tornyol's Spot CTA, splitting the primary action.
  2. Headline over truss — Light-gray 'NO MORE MOSQUITOES' loses contrast where it crosses the silver truss and bright ceiling.
  3. Careers nav link — Hiring link in a conversion fold pulls prospects away before the deposit ask.

Competitors

inferred from product, audience, and value prop
#1Tornyol71
#2Bzigobzigo.com58 #3Photonmatrixphotonmatrix.com18