Robin Radar Systemshttps://robinradar.com/

Your landing page’s weakest score is Mobile web.

How Robin Radar Systems ranks

  1. 1.Milliray75
  2. 2.Robin Radar Systems66
  3. 3.Fortem Technologies65
  4. 4.MatrixSpace64
  5. 5.Blighter Surveillance Systems60
  6. 6.Echodyne51
Fix Mobile web
66Growth scoreupdated

category scores

Mobile web48CTA58
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Mobile web48CTA58

Mobile web

48Poor

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture12
  1. Five-line headline — "RADAR SYSTEMS THAT HAVE Robin Radar Systems COVERED" barely scaled down and wraps into five cramped lines.
  2. Truncated body copy — Paragraph is cut off mid-sentence at the fold with no CTA visible anywhere above it.

CTA

58Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Robin Radar Systems
Milliray
MatrixSpace
Fortem Technologies

Problems

  • 'sales' makes click feel costly
  • no CTA in the hero itself
  • hidden behind hamburger on mobile
  • nav-sized, small vs headline

Value props

72Fair

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Robin Radar Systems’s headlineRADAR SYSTEMS THAT HAVE YOU COVEREDDetecting small objects is what we do, and it's what we do best. Bird, bat, or drone, our 360° radar systems log thousands of observations, scanning every second to track and classify with precision.

Working

Could improve

Trust

74Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Robin Radar Systems desktop capture for Trust

How Robin Radar Systems compares

Trust read

Information hierarchy

76Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Robin Radar Systems desktop capture for Information hierarchy

What works

What to improve