Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.

Fix Value props
58Growth scoreupdated

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Value props

42Poor

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Origin’s headline vagueWhat if

Working

  • Demo shows real product doing real work
  • Specific data: 57,252 predicted cells
  • Tissue percentages prove precision

Could improve

  • Headline is an unfinished animation
  • No subhead explains what Origin is
  • Value must be inferred from the UI

Information hierarchy

58Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Information hierarchy annotations on the desktop capture123
  1. Truncated typing headline — The animated 'What if |' headline is caught mid-type, so the fold never states what Origin is or does.
  2. Onboarding tooltip overlay — 'Click any cell' tooltip covers the left panel and adds a competing 'OKAY' button before the visitor reads anything.
  3. Cut-off left panel — 'Predicted cells' label and gene list are clipped by the tooltip and fold edge, leaving half-rendered UI in the first impression.

Trust

58Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Origin desktop capture for Trust

How Origin compares

Trust read

CTA

64Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

Origin

How Origin compares

Recommended rewrites

Mobile web

66Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Origin mobile capture for Mobile web

What works

What to improve